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Reviews For Viva Vista City
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Reviewer: the poet Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2009 6:07 am Title: Chapter 5 A Day of Visitors

this unnerves me as I suffer from an illness that i sometimes think requires me to be locked up in an attic somewhere. I heard a line once that said the people up north lock their crazies in an attic and the people down south leave them in a rocker on the front porch. Regarding Mary I would give my eye teeth to know what she knew.

Author's Response:

You know what Mary knows.

As far as Ella and her mental illness-you gotta watch old Ella to be sure what's real and what is pure show.

Reviewer: Mack Ireland Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2009 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

As you can see Eileen Larabee is no where near finished getting even with Ella. I am going to soften the man in black just a little. He has another child on the way and so far(in the coming story) the little people are running the show. Thank you for the review. Mack Ireland

Reviewer: the poet Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2009 4:21 am Title: Chapter 2 Return to Vista City

Bee yoo tee full. Have you read Straight Jacket? There is a line about Ella looking not as pretty as she was. Regarding the school house check out Liz' work. It is odd that the both of you think of the same thing but take different routes. Catch "things that go bump" and see if the cat seems familiar. Your work is a feast for the eyes as are hers. Yum!

Reviewer: Mack Ireland Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2009 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for reading my latest story. Much more is on the way.

Reviewer: the poet Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2009 5:18 am Title: Chapter 1

sweet beginning. looking forward to more. A nice feast for the eyes.

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