Reviewer: LilacQueen Signed [
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Date: 02 Apr 2009 8:31 am
Title: No Return
This good but much too short. You need to make the reader aware it is a drabble before opening it. That is what Warning and Challenge are for or Summary if you prefer.
It is nicely done but I was looking forward to a full fledged story.
Author's Response: Thanks. Summary has been updated.