Excellent story! I am not really sure wny you felt Chris had to live with Ella though. That was giving her what she wanted. even if he did kill her. Trust me she died happy. She was in his arms.


Author's Response: It's not a great loss for me if Ella died happy, it was the initial shock I was heading towards for the readers with questions of why would Chris go to her, spend all this time with her, and then kill her. I wanted Ella to figure out that Chris was there with her forever so she wouldn't hurt anyone anymore. He wouldn't leave her. He would play her sick game. Then when it came down to killing her it would have been the ultimate heart-stopping truth that Chris truly hated her.

You know I like the way you write! When I was reading this story, while listening to some really sad music, my emotions flipped upside down. It?s not only a good fanfiction, it?s also a great story about love not only between man and woman, but also the most powerful love ever - love for a child. You?re gifted author and one of writers who can make me cry. And I cried! Love this story...Good job, Suzy!

Author's Response: Oh, Rommie, what a nice compliment. Thank you dearly.

Suzy - This is a beautiful story - made me cry. He's back and Ella is history - good job.