Reviewer: Krystyna Lee Signed
26 Mar 2009 12:48 pm
The Devil?s Own
Good job! You've taken my 2 favorite 'worlds' and my 4 favorite men and blended them into a wonderful story full of great back story and wonderful main storylines. I liked your characterizations and the way you let us in to the characters thoughts & emotions. You also filled the stpry with lots of little details, like the cats, etc, which help flesh out a story and make it fuller, more realistic.
The baby was a terrific oc. I hope to see more of Jack and his prehensile tail. Being a mom of 2 now adut children you took me back to my son's thumb sucking and my daughters love of her pacifier. I worried enough about my youngest still sucking his thumb possibly when he went to school. Imagine worrying about Jack sucking his tail! Little ones are already monkey's in their own way - adding the tail is just too adorable.
I also hope to see more of the 7. After all c/v owe s/d don't they? I can see them going to help Sam keep/protect his child. Whatever you do I can't wait to see whats next.