20 Apr 2009 4:24 pm
The story unfolds
I like this story very much. At first I was surprised that Chris was with misty until i realized what and who was actually there. Becuase I was hoping that Chris and Mary would be together as it look like from the privious story. I look forward to the next installment
Author's Response: I hope that not everyone reads your review first because it may spoil it, but your kind words meant that I was successful in my subterfuge. I have the outlines for the remaining chapters now all I need is the time to put it all together. Hopefully by the end of the week. Enjoy!!