27 Jun 2009 5:39 pm
Chapter 5: Keeps Getting Better
Glad to see you again. This is very good. ch 1-5 You have me wondering all the time will he end up like her as his mate, or will he have his way with her or her way with him and then have to kill her. I like that while you have Mary's jealousy showing you didn't write her as some evil woman but yet you showed that she still cared for him enough that she wanted to protect him from those letters at least thats how I see it I could be wrong which is okay too. I also like how chris and Mary hugged it seems that Chris still has some feelings for her but is either afraid to show them for fear of what Ella would do or its just friendship which is still okay. Either way it works either with Mary or the vampire its still a supensefull story.
Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. You are right about Mary's jealousy with the letters. That is how I wanted readers to see it that she is protecting Chris more than she cares if he is angry with her. And you will just have to keep reading to find how what this lady vampire has in store for Chris--or the other way around. I will post the last few chapters shortly.