Reviewer: crystalkenobi Signed
05 Jan 2010 11:14 pm
Chapter 10 Memory's Resolutions
Whole story reveiew: Loved it. It worked that Rafe would use Mary to hurt Chris last, She is his final love so to speak. I liked also that you have Billy more grown up here and that you mention that all the guys have helped her raise him and that Billy understands taht untill chris feels safe that he will not marry his mother. I like the connection between vin and chris on a mental wave. NIce touch there. I also like that you have Vin come to understand why chris is the leader. I like that Mary helps him thru the nightmares etc. and that she rescues chris from ella at the hospital. Looks like Ella had her way with Chris again though, Chris will need a very hot shower after that to come clean. I love the references to the island getaway. Would lvoe to see a small short story on that. Good work on the team work there in showing how they work as a team. Keep up the good work. crystal
Author's Response: As long as you don't tell my mother I will try to oblige. I'm glad you liked the humor. I am also glad you liked the way I ended it. I just couldn't kill him off, he may show up when I least expect it.