Reviewer: Wildcat Signed [
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Date: 07 Aug 2008 12:03 am
Title: Chapter 1
I seriously hope there is more to this. Loved it. It seems like you purposely left pieces missing for a continuation, like did Danny really die or was he found some place down river? Why did Martin agree to stay then change his mind. What were they supposed to be investigating that caused all this in the first place. If Martin wants to really get away he should play along until he gets another chance to run. Why did Viv, Jack and Sam show up just to let the Marshalls take Martin away? Or were they part of stopping him from leaving knowing that he can't ever be Martin Fitzgerald again?
Author's Response: Danny died. It was a deep pond/lake. They weren't investigating anything, it was a trip to get away for the weekend. The DEA thought they were investigating a local drug route that smuggled them in to NYC. They were stopping him because he can't ever be Martin again.