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Reviewer: carolyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2005 5:37 am Title: Part 3

Yeah i just cant get into this linda character. Chris doesnt seem like himself. I will try reading more later. You are doing a good job on the main story. I like the concept. I am just not getting into the ofc. I need to relate or at least like the character. She reminded me of a whiny coworker i have. Good luck.

Reviewer: carolyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2005 5:33 am Title: Part 2

Not bad but i dindn't like one of the ofc's. I will check out the next part. maybe she'll grow on me. I liked the kellie one.

Reviewer: Carolyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2005 5:29 am Title: Part 1

Not bad. going to read on

Reviewer: Susie Burton Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2005 9:33 am Title: Part 1

Finally found the time to read this, and sister... am I glad I did! This is nicely written, and a very interesting AU. I liked how you've set everything up and explained the premise in this first chapter. I'm off to read the next part now, and I'm sure I won't be disappointed.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2005 8:18 pm Title: Part 10

Great Story, can't wait to read more! Continue the great work!

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