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Reviewer: barbara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2009 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

this was beautifully played. Thank you

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2007 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Suzy, this is a great story and I would love to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Rolinda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2007 8:40 am Title: Chapter 2

Well this is a well written story. There are some major burps and a couple of minor ones. First obsession was after Serpents so Ella hasn't been in town yet. Second Chris doesn't talk like Vin. Mary would not order Chris out of town regardless of the argument. The Judge hired them. The Judge will fire them.

The premise of the story is good. The plot just needed more thought.

Author's Response: Thank you for your advice. Though, the way I saw season 2, Obsession WAS before Serpents. I heard it was the other way around also, but I went by only what I saw. Thank you for reading and the feedback.

Author's Response: Also, this story was only meant to be about the dialogue. Nothing really else. Thanks.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2006 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very good, hope you continue very soon

Reviewer: Tarlan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2006 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great start, Suzy. Hope to see more soon :-)

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2006 8:29 am Title: Chapter 2

i like this. good job

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