Reviewer: Susie Burton Signed
21 Jan 2006 12:37 pm
Oh, my , you really went the whole hog with this one, Phantom Pen! Talk about double trouble times two! I thought Vin's musing about women going in packs to the loo was absolutely priceless. I loved how the MiB put up resistance when the ladies bound him in his office.... lol... not! The twist at the end when we found out the ladies' indentities was great... Way to go girls! Nice to read another smut-fic. Susie
Author's Response: Thanks i wanted to keep it humorus as well as sexy. Glad you liked, i love your work.