This story makes me laugh every time I read it, and I have read it a lot. Even printed it out and read it for a goodnight reading material before bed.
I don't laugh because it's poor, I laugh because it's so real and amazing that it could have been used in the series easily. And so many years later.
From the first two seasons, you know you want Chris and Mary to get together but you also know a relationship with these two complicated people won't happen overnight...and you've made it that they didn't get together for years. That's what made it so real.
Reviewer: SuzySigned Date: 08 Mar 2006
Title: Chapter 1: 1
I am very honored to be the first to post a review for this story. It's sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD!!!
I love the description, the atmosphere, the action, everything! You could visualize where the characters were and how they felt with each other.
I love the confrontation between Chris and Mary towards the end. It felt VERY real!!! Bravo!
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2004 Updated: 29 Nov 2004
Reviewer: SuzySigned Date: 07 Mar 2006
Title: Chapter 1: 1
Very good story! I feel for Mary severally through the entire time and felt bad for her when she made that nasty comment about hating Vin. I know she didn't mean it---but Chris and Mary were meant to be together.
Very good story!!!
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2006 Updated: 19 Jun 2006
Reviewer: SuzySigned Date: 29 Jun 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
Author's Response: Thanks Suzy, I\'m glad you liked it. This story was inspired by true events and it just made me want to write my two favorite guys into the scene instead. It wouldn\'t go away until I did it and I\'m glad people are enjoying it. Wildcat
Summary: Dean writes a letter to the only relative that he has who cares enough to listen. Its a shame that chris doesn't know who he is. Categories:Magnificent Seven > ATF Characters: Chris Larabee Genres: Angst/Drama Warnings: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Completed: No
Word count: 1272 Read Count: 409
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2006 Updated: 01 Aug 2006